WALHT write an explanation
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I will have an introduction
(Title, hook, 1 sentence saying what the writing will be about)
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I will have an body of text
(look at my first picture, use my keywords to write 1-2 sentences explaining it)
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I will have an conclusion
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How a circuit works
Have you ever wondered how a circuit works?
This piece of writing will explain how a
circuit works. Electricity
is all around us like using a electric toothbrush
and a light bulb.
Electricity is tiny
particles that are moving around
your Tvs, phones, and all kinds of stuff that
haves
electricity.
particles that are moving around
your Tvs, phones, and all kinds of stuff that
haves
electricity.
for example if you switc
h something and it lights up that’s electricity.
Electricity has a negative side and a positive
side. We are all thankful that we have electricity
in our life’s
h something and it lights up that’s electricity.
Electricity has a negative side and a positive
side. We are all thankful that we have electricity
in our life’s
i love your writing but maybe you can move your writing to the other side
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