Friday, 29 June 2018

WALHT write an explanation

WALHT write an explanation


Success Criteria
Self Assessment
I will have an introduction
(Title, hook, 1 sentence saying what the writing will be about)
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I will have an body of text
(look at my first picture, use my keywords to write 1-2 sentences explaining it)
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I will have an conclusion
(I will end with a personal statement or interesting fact)
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     How a circuit works
Have you ever wondered how a circuit works?

This piece of writing will explain how a
circuit works. Electricity
is all around us like using a electric toothbrush
and a light bulb.
Electricity is tiny
particles that are moving around
your Tvs, phones, and all kinds of stuff that
haves
electricity.
for example if you switc
h something and it lights up that’s electricity.
Electricity has a negative side and a positive
side. We are all thankful that we have electricity
in our life’s      

2 comments:

  1. i love your writing but maybe you can move your writing to the other side

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  2. good improvement

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